Out of Syllabus 23
What will you do when you think that
you are in deep tension or dilemma
what would you do when you feel that
deep frustration is creeping up on you
Those lonely nights that haunts you
and make you wish you were never born
Then there is this dragon, that breaths fire
which kills you slowly, but definitely...
which helps you to forget, if not take away,
all those nuisance which haunts you.
The thing which is used as refuge by many
The thing which is equally hated by many
85mm spark of death known as CIGARETTE!!!
-[Thanks to Nikhil Kuriakose for title and pic ]-
-[visit:- http://niksnaps.blogspot.com/ ]-
Wow..I could use this in rallies..but then they would guess at the beginning itself making the dragon less terrifying
ReplyDeletebest of luck :)
DeleteIts Nice...
ReplyDeletethank u...
Deletea poem to ponder..:)
ReplyDeleteya indeed something to ponder..
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Deletewell written hari:)
ReplyDeletethank u... :)
DeleteI hate smoking ...and when I see people smoking in public places ,wonder why they have to cause trouble to others too and feel sick inhaling the smoke...
ReplyDeleteNice ..Hope u dont smoke dear!!
ReplyDeleteThan k u...
Deleteit is not 85mm spark of death.. i wud call it 85mm spark of life.. it always helped me to calm my heart..
ReplyDeleteit doesnt calm ur heart.. it calms ur mind but kills ur body
DeleteNow a days girls are smoking more than boys....Better try to spread this poem.
ReplyDeleteWell done and all the best.
this poem is not critic... it is tribute :)
DeleteI hate the smell of the fumes cumg out of tis 85mm spark of death......its upto one's wish to smoke or nt,bt i dnt knw y they smoke in public n spoils rest of tems lyf.......dear,tis was a very gud note:)waiting 4 an anothr note frm ur mind to make an awareness abt public smoking.............:)
ReplyDelete@anaghaechi.. again as i told b4.. this is not a critic, this is a tribute
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